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Muhammad Ali
Hyderabad Club
When I was 12 years old, I used to play cricket in Niaz
stadium. As there were no other activities for youngsters to do in Hyderabad.
One day when I was playing cricket, (I was fielder), Batsmen smashed the ball
and ball went all the boundary for six, When I went to get ball I discovered a
club which was about 2.5 acres big, I went to have a look inside but guard
didn’t allow me and told me Club is only for members. They got me ball by themselves.
When I get back to my home, I told my father there is new club in Hyderabad
named as Hyderabad Club and asked my father to come and visit that club with
me. As my father just came back from office and he was tired so he told me we
will visit it tomorrow. That night, I was so excited to see that club, I
couldn’t sleep in excitement. Next day, my father woke me up and asked me to
get ready we are going to visit Hyderabad Club.
When we reached there the guard
stopped us and asked for membership number. My father told them we are here to
be member. The guard took us to administration office where we met Mr Zahid Ali
Shiekh. In his office, I saw board their from which I came to know that
Hyderabad Club was inaugurated in 2000 and completed its construction in
2002. The man who we met in office told
us the procedure of membership we asked him for tour around club he said okay u
may go and visit the Club. When we came out of office we started with
basketball court plus tennis court because it was nearest one. The court was 78
feet long in length with a net dividing both sides equally. After that went to
the pool. There were 3 pools in Hyderabad Club. One for beginners, Other one
was for teenagers and third one was for the intermediate swimmers. After visiting
pool we went to walking track which was 400 meters big in diameter. After that
we went to hall which contains 2 badminton courts and 2 table tennis tables and
a way to walk to gym. We loved the club and tried to take membership as soon as
possible.
13thApril was the perfect day
for 10 year old Inder Vineet to go for swimming. His father had finally become
a member of Hyderabad club only after inder begged hun q million times to do
so. Inder wants to learn how to swim. On Wednesday inder left home at 3:45 for
third swimming lesson. When he arrived at club he was told to leave, perhaps,
pool was closed. But when inder was heading back, he was called back by two
man, presumably lifeguards. At 4:30 that day, Mr chatandas, inder’s father
received a phone call every parent dreads. He was told that his only son was
foundin the swimming pool, having drowned and has been taken to Ghani hospital
Hyderabad. The young boy was admitted to LUMHS hospital in Karachi where he
struggled between life and death a week before he passed away. When his father
asked club administration to provide him the CCTV footage of tragic incident.
The footage he was shown the young boy being taken out of pool. When they asked
for full footage, they were conveniently told that the footage was deleted and
management didn’t kept backup
Told by officials, Every month DIG Khadim Rind come to pay
visit to Hyderabad club and every year it is being repainted and repaired.
Hyderabad
biggest and greatest melo “Lahooti Melo” takes place in Hyderabad club. It is 2
day melo where in day time people come to attend music sessions in which music
scholar and entrepreneur come to tell
about ethics of music and to give motivational speeches respectively. In night
time there is musical concert where families come to enjoy. Last time nearly
14,000 people visited this melo.
really awesome :) :D
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